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I feel you inside me,
moving shard of glass.
Peeking through mirror
fragments.
Eyes like hunger, mouth of tears.
Salivating
ghost so long, your birth will be my death.
I broke all of your toys
but you,
you stole my burning feathers.
Raw,
flayed,
ugly,
stupid
child, don't you know wings hurt?
Get back in, my old.
- I.E.C. 9/18/13
Peeking through mirror
fragments.
Eyes like hunger, mouth of tears.
Salivating
ghost so long, your birth will be my death.
I broke all of your toys
but you,
you stole my burning feathers.
Raw,
flayed,
ugly,
stupid
child, don't you know wings hurt?
Get back in, my old.
- I.E.C. 9/18/13
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Unique, I will give it that. I feel like the last line should have more... 'my old' what? Friend? Lover? Of course, you could have left it that way for effect and if so, you've succeded. I like the imagery behind 'burning feathers'. Well done.